Thesis Statements

#5 In Arthur Miller's classic, "The Crucible," reputations play an important role, during the

whole witchcraft ordeal in Salem, Massachusetts.

This thesis statement is good because it tells us in what situation the theme was important and it is also very simple and straight to the point

#15 In Arthur Miller's widely known play The Crucible, harsh punishment and even death is

given to faultless citizens who are accused of being involved with witchcraft.

This thesis is excellent in my opinion. It explains the who, what, and where of the idea. It also uses better, more attractive vocabulary

In The Crucible, Abigail Williams is one of the main characters in which goes to extreme lengths to protect her name.

I like this quote because it focuses in on a more direct thought.