Thesis Statements

#5 In Arthur Miller's classic, "The Crucible," reputations play an important role, during the

whole witchcraft ordeal in Salem, Massachusetts.

This thesis statement is good because it tells us in what situation the theme was important and it is also very simple and straight to the point

#15 In Arthur Miller's widely known play The Crucible, harsh punishment and even death is

given to faultless citizens who are accused of being involved with witchcraft.

This thesis is excellent in my opinion. It explains the who, what, and where of the idea. It also uses better, more attractive vocabulary

In The Crucible, Abigail Williams is one of the main characters in which goes to extreme lengths to protect her name.

I like this quote because it focuses in on a more direct thought.

#6

The first day of school led to the last day of three kids lives. Yaquiline, the (lothario), Yessica, the (maverick), and Yanessa, the (liaison) of Yaquiline. On that day, they experienced a (camaraderie) between each other in English class. It started fine, they all sat down in class while Mr. Schreiber introduced himself and the class. They figured out he was a (caste), because he was wearing a red, white, and blue tuxedo. But after seeing that, they realized who was amongst them. . . the infamous “Y Ladies.”
Yaqualine, and Yanessa, hated each other because Yaqualine took a bite of Yanessa’s Spicy Chicken Sandwich, which led to Yanessa calling Yaqualin (tawdry). Yaqualine, or “Yaquie”, stated that as a (philanderer), she slept with Yanessa’s boyfriend. Yanessa’s previous view of as a (convivial) young girl, immediately went away.
One day Yessica came to school and yelled at Yanessa and Yaqualine using (solecism), Yessica couldn’t say anything because she felt (bumptious) because of all those spicy chicken burgers that she ate. Yaqualine didnt really care because she was a (hobnob), she was tired of arguing. So the rivalry between Yanessa and Yaqualine came to an end. Many people say it was a (cabal), because even after the argument, they still were not friends.
But the weird part of the story is, why didn’t Yessica get involved? She has the (baleful) of words that confuses the Y Ladies to death. But recently she found the Y Ladies (bellicose) and unbearable. She could have won this argument and be the number one Y lady and live in (sybarite) for the rest of her life!!

Renegade

I really don't have like any idea or philosophy I would die for right now. I think it's too early to start an idea. I don't even know what I want to do with my life, what kind of job I'd like or even if I would like to go to college. I'm definitely no renegade. In case you don't know what a renegade is, it is a person who deserts and betrays an organization, country, or set of principles. So, people like Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. and Benjamin Franklin.

The Project

The project went really well. We all helped out with the work and parts each of us had. We did goof around sometimes but, I was really pleased with the liveliness that there was in doing the project. We all had a really good time doing the project.I wish that all projects went this well. I wouldn't change anything about the way this project went.

Rumors

One time, this is a big laugh, at least to me, some people thought that I was gay. I was like really shocked, I almost fell over and died. I guess it was because no one has ever seen me "with" a girl, like holding hands or something. But, I just had to tell people that I wasn't and everything went back to normal I guess.

The Crucible

Definately can think of of one. It happened yesterday, my mom was getting ready to wash clothes so she was going through my pants pockets for anything. She came across my wallet which had like a lot of money in it for someone who doesn't work, so she thought I was like selling drugs, or stealing or worse like I was selling my body. It took like two hours of convincing her that it was just money left over from different earns I ran for her like going to the store, so she finally believed me and let me keep the money.